Kyle Stone

Sci-fi meets slavery in this great story. Micah is captured by the Kudites, an advanced civilization choosing to live as a series of clans, and made into a pleasure slave for one of the clan chiefs. Micah's loss of identity and becoming Chento which means 500 totally objectifies the man as he goes through the ritualistic hazing. The sexual abuse and humiliation that Chento must go through to become Attlad's personal body slave is monstrous and pretty hot. The writing is a little rough in places but the story moves along well. I like Chento and his devotion to his new people. Definitely a hardcore book worth reading.… (mer)

What a different follow up story to The Initiation of PB 500 and loaded with a plethora of perversions. I have to agree with Vivian Archer that this book should have some warnings in the blurb. The torture that Micah/Chento went through at the hands of Kerdas went from scrotal ballooning to scat and this was all done because Kerdas was jealous of Attlad. I have to admit that only the scat squicked me and bestiality is not my thing but the other tortures hit my kinks well. Everything in the story was done either out of a twisted sense of jealousy or for political gain and what may offend a reader was all considered perfectly socially acceptable. Dadani and her little cadre of women playing with the pearl boys were not much more than bored, spoiled little children. The cock bobbing done to the pearl boys so that they could not impregnate the women was different and it made me wonder how it was done. I liked Bar and the arrogant Grir. Their bodies were messed with but they were characters of some depth. The mysteries of the Cave of Truth were interesting showing a society built on both technology and the esoteric. I found it a bit incredulous that Micah/Chento was in any kind of physical condition to escape from the secret dungeon, go through the rigors of the ritual of Truth and then set Attlad free. Seriously? The man was near dead from abuse, dehydration and starvation. Yes, this fiction and primarily a vehicle to see how many kinks could be crammed into a story but there needs to be a touch of reality. The role reversals and the HEA ending were very much a surprise to me. I recommend this book not for its story value but more as a test to see how many exotic kinks you can take in one sitting.… (mer)