I hadn't heard or read any reviews of this book prior to opening it.

I felt the base story was a good start but the descriptive voice was very lacking. at many points other novel references were used to describe instead of just writing out the description. There were so many fan boy references it was distracting.

I almost feel like the author was like what if I combine bits and pieces of all these famous books and make a story out of it. It was slightly distracting as it wasn't explained or anything.

as will all beginner writers books usually get better so im going to continue the story and be optimistic. ( )