Kind of weak

Aside from people saying he’s an orc, the MC doesn’t really act terribly different from a human. He doesn’t really define orcishness in any particular way. Then you’ve got the rabbit girl who...bounces. And the elf...who does nothing necessarily different.

See, there’s no depth to the individual characters/species. Nobody really speaks a different language, though the MC is a bit more formal. The magic glasses are clumsy.

Even the final battle seemed too pat.

The sex...I mean, the characters weren’t really established. Orcish culture and sexual practices were barely mentioned, so again it was just human stuff. Making it seem more juvenile than anything else.

Worldbuilding was absent.

Frequent typos and homonym errors (‘vial’ and ‘vile’ are not interchangeable).

It wasn’t unreadable. Simply amateurish.

I will not continue the series.

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Kind of weak

Aside from people saying he’s an orc, the MC doesn’t really act terribly different from a human. He doesn’t really define orcishness in any particular way. Then you’ve got the rabbit girl who...bounces. And the elf...who does nothing necessarily different.

See, there’s no depth to the individual characters/species. Nobody really speaks a different language, though the MC is a bit more formal. The magic glasses are clumsy.

Even the final battle seemed too pat.

The sex...I mean, the characters weren’t really established. Orcish culture and sexual practices were barely mentioned, so again it was just human stuff. Making it seem more juvenile than anything else.

Worldbuilding was absent.

Frequent typos and homonym errors (‘vial’ and ‘vile’ are not interchangeable).

It wasn’t unreadable. Simply amateurish.

I will not continue the series.

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